Please rate me and give me advise

[shamus.coyle]

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Hi I'm Shamus and I just turned 18. What are some things that I can work on to become more attractive and can you also rate me. I am new to the community so thanks for welcoming me! Also, don't be afraid to critique me brutally and go in depth I need to hear everything so that I can improve on it.

 

[laundry37]

Need to work on you jawline

 

[shamus.coyle]

How do I do it