rate my poetry

[snoopy12]

 

[True_Fakecell]

My iq is too low for this shit

 

[Deleted Member 47925]

this shit is ass

 

[snoopy12]

My iq is too low for this shit

i wrote it while i was drunk last night

 

[ragebait77]

Mind explaining what the fuck this means?

 

[snoopy12]

this shit is ass

you dont get it

 

[Deleted Member 47925]

you dont get it

no shit, you gave me a rock to chew on here.

 

[foiddefender67]

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5 of everything please

 

[Deleted Member 81310]

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What is this supposed to mean

 

[Deleted Member 80195]

 

[snoopy12]

Mind explaining what the fuck this means?

my skin is dry

 

[Gorie]

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i cant understand white people

 

[AClonedTyrone]

pure psuedointellectual niggababble saw two words and continued to dnr

 

[nomi]

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I see the vision

 

[sparkle]

this is how my notes look tbh

 

[Gorie]

pure psuedointellectual niggababble saw two words and continued to dnr

you are a n****r
no wonder why you dont understand

 

[snoopy12]

5 of everything please

that was for my coworkers i was getting food at work

 

[foiddefender67]

that was for my coworkers i was getting food at work

Three medium fries please

 

[Ltnhell]

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Three medium fries please

 

[snoopy12]

I see the vision

oh i bet

 

[snoopy12]

Three medium fries please

Three medium fries please

ok

 

[foiddefender67]

ok

Thank you

 

[snoopy12]

Thank you

np

 

[moonlight1]

what’s the meaning?

 

[snoopy12]

what’s the meaning?

my skin is dry in the winter

 

[TonyDr]

this shit is ass

This + Dnr + Hop off from the booze

 

[snoopy12]

This + Dnr + Hop off from the booze

what this mean

 

[TonyDr]

what this mean

Drink water instead of alcohol

 

[snoopy12]

Drink water instead of alcohol

i like alcohol

 

[nate]

,

 

[snoopy12]

This this is genuine dog ass, wtf are they doing in turkey

i dont live in turkey
this is jersey

 

[nate]

The mcdonalds order on top killed me

 

[nate]

i dont live in turkey
this is jersey

miau

 

[snoopy12]

The mcdonalds order on top killed me

girl bye i had to pick up food for my coworkers

 

[snoopy12]

miau

fuckkk say it again

 

[jkcwakcjw]

i take the sunflower
pluck at each petal
love or love not
yellow answers fill my hand
they do not feed me much

 

[Randim]

shakespeare died so this n***a could take ova

 

[nate]

girl bye i had to pick up food for my coworkers

I thought that was part of the poem

 

[snoopy12]

i take the sunflower
pluck at each petal
love or love not
yellow answers fill my hand
they do not feed me much

right

 

[snoopy12]

shakespeare died so this n***a could take ova

city boiii

 

[snoopy12]

I thought that was part of the poem

no i just forgot how to make a new note

 

[jkcwakcjw]

right

they dont understand us

 

[arzzey]

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flow could've been better, the sense behind the words is good tho

 

[snoopy12]

they dont understand us

ç\

 

[snoopy12]

flow could've been better, the sense behind the words is good tho

thanks for the feedback

 

[jkcwakcjw]

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Poetry poetry poetry poetry
poe of tree and poe of tree
I do me but what a tree
knows? how to grow?
hang a negro?
now? no no, last time was hundreds of years ago
no, only 1968.

 

[snoopy12]

Poetry poetry poetry poetry
poe of tree and poe of tree
I do me but what a tree
knows? how to grow?
hang a negro?
now? no no, last time was hundreds of years ago
no, only 1968.

are you all alright
no
you are all al left

 

[snoopy12]

bump
only high iq post here

 

[foiddefender67]

bump
only high iq post here

Callate pendeja

 

[snoopy12]

Callate pendeja

puedo ir al baño