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tchiki brr

tchiki brr

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I walked past this bench every single night, Never once feeling lonely or out of place. Yet somehow, these past few days, Each time I pass, my heart aches with the sorrow of lost love. Perhaps because I still see us there, Sitting side by side on that bench—the us we used to be, Knowing all too well that we're no longer the same, Changed forever by the choices we made. So I walk past with my eyes turned away, While my heart overflows with memories that still burn.

Still better in french
 
tchiki brr said:
I walked past this bench every single night, Never once feeling lonely or out of place. Yet somehow, these past few days, Each time I pass, my heart aches with the sorrow of lost love. Perhaps because I still see us there, Sitting side by side on that bench—the us we used to be, Knowing all too well that we're no longer the same, Changed forever by the choices we made. So I walk past with my eyes turned away, While my heart overflows with memories that still burn.

Still better in french
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What the heck happened to u @tchiki brr? 😭
But that's a rly nice poem. What's the name of it? 👀
 
tchiki brr said:
I walked past this bench every single night, Never once feeling lonely or out of place. Yet somehow, these past few days, Each time I pass, my heart aches with the sorrow of lost love. Perhaps because I still see us there, Sitting side by side on that bench—the us we used to be, Knowing all too well that we're no longer the same, Changed forever by the choices we made. So I walk past with my eyes turned away, While my heart overflows with memories that still burn.

Still better in french
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where is this poem from??
 
I love it.
I used to enjoy writing poetry, but I gradually gave it up; my poems are still gathering dust in my notes app
 
tchiki brr said:
I walked past this bench every single night, Never once feeling lonely or out of place. Yet somehow, these past few days, Each time I pass, my heart aches with the sorrow of lost love. Perhaps because I still see us there, Sitting side by side on that bench—the us we used to be, Knowing all too well that we're no longer the same, Changed forever by the choices we made. So I walk past with my eyes turned away, While my heart overflows with memories that still burn.

Still better in french
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I guess bro 😟
 
tchiki brr said:
I walked past this bench every single night, Never once feeling lonely or out of place. Yet somehow, these past few days, Each time I pass, my heart aches with the sorrow of lost love. Perhaps because I still see us there, Sitting side by side on that bench—the us we used to be, Knowing all too well that we're no longer the same, Changed forever by the choices we made. So I walk past with my eyes turned away, While my heart overflows with memories that still burn.

Still better in french
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Nice man.
 
Nice AI bro, you not fooling me, and where is the format, this is just a fucking passage.
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tchiki brr said:
Mine are original french i translate them too they sound better in the original vers
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Love me and end my life with just a kiss
Touch me and bring me back to life when you stand at my grave
With Perseus, I climbed to the summit of my greatest reflection
It was the Moon that lit the darkness of our entire world
Reflecting the invisible force that pulls us toward desire
And I begged the Gods to grant me the gift
They took away my free will and gave me your love
They demanded my devotion to other desires
So that, throughout my life, you would always come first
For with an artist in love, you will never die
You will remain in my works, portrayed and immortal

😅
 
CesarZet said:
Love me and end my life with just a kiss
Touch me and bring me back to life when you stand at my grave
With Perseus, I climbed to the summit of my greatest reflection
It was the Moon that lit the darkness of our entire world
Reflecting the invisible force that pulls us toward desire
And I begged the Gods to grant me the gift
They took away my free will and gave me your love
They demanded my devotion to other desires
So that, throughout my life, you would always come first
For with an artist in love, you will never die
You will remain in my works, portrayed and immortal

😅
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n***a this shit so good
 
CesarZet said:
Love me and end my life with just a kiss
Touch me and bring me back to life when you stand at my grave
With Perseus, I climbed to the summit of my greatest reflection
It was the Moon that lit the darkness of our entire world
Reflecting the invisible force that pulls us toward desire
And I begged the Gods to grant me the gift
They took away my free will and gave me your love
They demanded my devotion to other desires
So that, throughout my life, you would always come first
For with an artist in love, you will never die
You will remain in my works, portrayed and immortal

😅
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We are both poetry boss😍😍😍😍😍
 
CesarZet said:
Love me and end my life with just a kiss
Touch me and bring me back to life when you stand at my grave
With Perseus, I climbed to the summit of my greatest reflection
It was the Moon that lit the darkness of our entire world
Reflecting the invisible force that pulls us toward desire
And I begged the Gods to grant me the gift
They took away my free will and gave me your love
They demanded my devotion to other desires
So that, throughout my life, you would always come first
For with an artist in love, you will never die
You will remain in my works, portrayed and immortal

😅
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Can we lwk make a collab
 
CesarZet said:
Love me and end my life with just a kiss
Touch me and bring me back to life when you stand at my grave
With Perseus, I climbed to the summit of my greatest reflection
It was the Moon that lit the darkness of our entire world
Reflecting the invisible force that pulls us toward desire
And I begged the Gods to grant me the gift
They took away my free will and gave me your love
They demanded my devotion to other desires
So that, throughout my life, you would always come first
For with an artist in love, you will never die
You will remain in my works, portrayed and immortal

😅
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Yooo whattt 🥹
We got poets here, y'all better win awards for me
 
wai, are u even in schl? 😭
 
👑Ghost said:
do they do competitions in ur schl? In my old schl they did, but for creative writing, idk abt poetry
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They do not sad but i was considering showing it at my french teacher to see if he is gonna like it since he is a teacher yknow
 
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