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reply and i'll write you a poem

Ghoultune said:
YWqe
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haunting me
in my sleep
the melody soft and sweet
breathing as I pretend to count the sheep
1 2 3
yet theres another creak
theres a ghoul in this building
and its singing a tune
its got a melancholy beat
ill have to pull up my blanket and cover my feet
theres a ghoul in my bedroom
and it sings me a song
a tune to help me asleep
guess you could call it a treat
 
RAD said:
haunting me
in my sleep
the melody soft and sweet
breathing as I pretend to count the sheep
1 2 3
yet theres another creak
theres a ghoul in this building
and its singing a tune
its got a melancholy beat
ill have to pull up my blanket and cover my feet
theres a ghoul in my bedroom
and it sings me a song
a tune to help me asleep
guess you could call it a treat
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Banger
 
jkcwakcjw said:
im fine with a haiku
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just wait
kale vegetables and treats
candy chocolate and brownies
water helps it all settle down
a new rumble of my stomach sounds
kiwi cucumber anything I can eat!
just let me finish another feast
wanting more and more, hey! theres takeaway at the door
 
Prince said:
Okay, it's gotta be sincere.
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it is only a good heart that can see rightly
one with golden blood pouring from its seams
a good man will see the world brightly
a good solider will see the world as fiends
but a prince walks differently his stride slow and firm
the children in the courtyard mimic and hope theyll eventually learn
a prince must be humble with a strong will and mind
there is only one prince of this forum as you may clearly find
the prince from Ireland
who lives in the uk
he will save us all from the purgatory that we may reach one day
 
RAD said:
it is only a good heart that can see rightly
one with golden blood pouring from its seams
a good man will see the world brightly
a good solider will see the world as fiends
but a prince walks differently his stride slow and firm
the children in the courtyard mimic and hope theyll eventually learn
a prince must be humble with a strong will and mind
there is only one prince of this forum as you may clearly find
the prince from Ireland
who lives in the uk
he will save us all from the purgatory that we may reach one day
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Beautiful
 
Lemontree said:
Me please
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the weather is atrocious
lord its left the whole town in despair
oh the trembles
oh the cries from the animal left like spares
the storm tortuous my spirit
its fevered mind
seeping into my skin changing how I feel for mankind
yet a tree stands tall its roots bound by the grass
a forest sees the storm and it also sees it pass
look around this forest
really nothing changed at last
a tree will grow and wither
the storm will not make it any fast
a tree can grow lemons
a tree can grow apples
a tree may be skinny
it may only grow branches that coil like snakes
but as you look at this forest
the storm gone far in the past
we are all trees only affected by age and the way time will let us last
 
RAD said:
the weather is atrocious
lord its left the whole town in despair
oh the trembles
oh the cries from the animal left like spares
the storm tortuous my spirit
its fevered mind
seeping into my skin changing how I feel for mankind
yet a tree stands tall its roots bound by the grass
a forest sees the storm and it also sees it pass
look around this forest
really nothing changed at last
a tree will grow and wither
the storm will not make it any fast
a tree can grow lemons
a tree can grow apples
a tree may be skinny
it may only grow branches that coil like snakes
but as you look at this forest
the storm gone far in the past
we are all trees only affected by age and the way time will let us last
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Read every bit❤️
 
RAD said:
just wait
kale vegetables and treats
candy chocolate and brownies
water helps it all settle down
a new rumble of my stomach sounds
kiwi cucumber anything I can eat!
just let me finish another feast
wanting more and more, hey! theres takeaway at the door
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wowwww
thats...
something
jk i love it :peepoLove: :peepoLove:
i like how u did the thing with the name
 
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lumen said:
Me
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only once in a while
whispers and talking may plague her mind
destined for colours
red white blues in her sky
the sun settles
paining her halo gold
every man hopes theyll be the hand she decided to hold
only a man with a heavy heart would dare to be so bold
her beauty is blinding
she will send shivers down so cold
but once in a while
something may catch her eye
the sounds will cease maybe shes finally found her peace
no light needed to guide her this time the paths so clear
the most beautiful woman has now silenced all her fears
as the clouds part
the roads ending is now finally near
a true warrior who deserves her sparkles with no fear
a knight with armour as smooth as her halo
oh and she looks at him knowing this is no fallo
shes found the one deserving of her eyes
her beautiful looks now will never subside
as a knight who loves her will always be by her side
 
RAD said:
only once in a while
whispers and talking may plague her mind
destined for colours
red white blues in her sky
the sun settles
paining her halo gold
every man hopes theyll be the hand she decided to hold
only a man with a heavy heart would dare to be so bold
her beauty is blinding
she will send shivers down so cold
but once in a while
something may catch her eye
the sounds will cease maybe shes finally found her peace
no light needed to guide her this time the paths so clear
the most beautiful woman has now silenced all her fears
as the clouds part
the roads ending is now finally near
a true warrior who deserves her sparkles with no fear
a knight with armour as smooth as her halo
oh and she looks at him knowing this is no fallo
shes found the one deserving of her eyes
her beautiful looks now will never subside
as a knight who loves her will always be by her side
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Amazing I love u
 
born superior said:
do me!
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everyone wishes there dreams will be fulfilled
how can they be happy watching everyone else succeed?
trophies and medals will stack their walls
but oh how theres stays barren empty such a bore
a certificate may flutter down behind your draws
the words lost but really where they ever yours?
a piece of paper handed to all who lay their eyes
nothing special really I see no problem in letting the paper die
but someone out there has no paper at all
their numbers at 0 as low as the sea shore
a certificate may help them
but unfortunately it means nothing to you anymore
its shiny and smooth the certificate gleams
it use to mean something at least that what it seems
but to me its special
a certificate close to sunlight
when it bears its self into my hands ill only hold it tight
thank you for always being the light
 
RAD said:
everyone wishes there dreams will be fulfilled
how can they be happy watching everyone else succeed?
trophies and medals will stack their walls
but oh how theres stays barren empty such a bore
a certificate may flutter down behind your draws
the words lost but really where they ever yours?
a piece of paper handed to all who lay their eyes
nothing special really I see no problem in letting the paper die
but someone out there has no paper at all
their numbers at 0 as low as the sea shore
a certificate may help them
but unfortunately it means nothing to you anymore
its shiny and smooth the certificate gleams
it use to mean something at least that what it seems
but to me its special
a certificate close to sunlight
when it bears its self into my hands ill only hold it tight
thank you for always being the light
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you're talented 💚
 
prettybird said:
Sup bihhhhh
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a sign of disaster
the nest has no feed
the chicks chirp thinking they may have already had their last meal
shaking branches on unsteady roots
baby birds falling may be enroute
however
tweet tweet tweet
a sweet bird sings
melody making me think I could grow my own wings
every part of me aches to amplify the sound
the chicks and all animals will stop on the ground
oh how this sweet bird sings
making it all make sense of things
pretty bird with its devouring tune
makes you believe maybe better things will be destined for you
 
dipenhydramine said:
can i have one plss
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Let today be today and tomorrow be the next
Dipping your fingers in new things is not always the best
Keep them clenched and protected to make sure not to make a mess
You to me will never not be one who deserves to rest
Innerworkings rusting and letting parasites fest
Solving things can cause you to loose your head
Steady mind framed like a photo
Youve known it the whole time that your days are unlimited
Let this second be now and a minute the next
Flowing like a river
Its unfortunate you have a heavy chest
Let this breathe be your first and continue with the rest
 
RAD said:
only once in a while
whispers and talking may plague her mind
destined for colours
red white blues in her sky
the sun settles
paining her halo gold
every man hopes theyll be the hand she decided to hold
only a man with a heavy heart would dare to be so bold
her beauty is blinding
she will send shivers down so cold
but once in a while
something may catch her eye
the sounds will cease maybe shes finally found her peace
no light needed to guide her this time the paths so clear
the most beautiful woman has now silenced all her fears
as the clouds part
the roads ending is now finally near
a true warrior who deserves her sparkles with no fear
a knight with armour as smooth as her halo
oh and she looks at him knowing this is no fallo
shes found the one deserving of her eyes
her beautiful looks now will never subside
as a knight who loves her will always be by her side
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@Knight this is about you btw
 
RAD said:
a sign of disaster
the nest has no feed
the chicks chirp thinking they may have already had their last meal
shaking branches on unsteady roots
baby birds falling may be enroute
however
tweet tweet tweet
a sweet bird sings
melody making me think I could grow my own wings
every part of me aches to amplify the sound
the chicks and all animals will stop on the ground
oh how this sweet bird sings
making it all make sense of things
pretty bird with its devouring tune
makes you believe maybe better things will be destined for you
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wow i wasn't expecting something good. mirin the creative writing techniques
 
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