Short story

[lostintime]

The scent of blood hung heavy in the air; he was stained with his own crime and her blood. The murder had been committed. She lay on the floor in a pool of blood. So vulnerable now. He took some of her blood and marked his face with it – two horizontal streaks, one beneath each cheekbone. A symbol of victory.

He dyed his fingernails and smeared both eyelids with that rich liquid. Smugly, he went to look at himself in the mirror to see the effect it had, but there, staring back at him, was horror. Another face was staring at him, its eyelids motionless and its cadaverous skin tinged with a pale green hue. He studied the figure. His dead lover was gazing intently into his eyes. He moved closer to the mirror and stroked the glass; he looked truly attractive with that make-up on. So twisted. Not his fault. His girlfriend was just an illusion, of course. She was dead; she wasn’t looking at him. The pangs of guilt would soon fade away…
Pain. Death. Blood. Her. Guilty

The mirror began to shake. He began to shake. His knees buckled the moment he realised what he had done. There was no turning back. One stab to slit his throat, the other two to his stomach. She had fallen to the floor in an unusual manner, silently. The dead make no sound when stabbed. Not like in the films. Her dead corpse was still warm. She was beautiful in death, he thought

 

[zennn]

did read

what am i gonna do now

 

[Тоска́]

get your ass back on ao3 nobody to around 3/4 people gaf about literary efforts on forums like this

 

[lostintime]

did read

what am i gonna do now

Thanks

get your ass back on ao3 nobody to around 3/4 people gaf about literary efforts on forums like this

Wrote it in 5 min, actually

 

[wutdamooo]

The scent of blood hung heavy in the air; he was stained with his own crime and her blood. The murder had been committed. She lay on the floor in a pool of blood. So vulnerable now. He took some of her blood and marked his face with it – two horizontal streaks, one beneath each cheekbone. A symbol of victory.

He dyed his fingernails and smeared both eyelids with that rich liquid. Smugly, he went to look at himself in the mirror to see the effect it had, but there, staring back at him, was horror. Another face was staring at him, its eyelids motionless and its cadaverous skin tinged with a pale green hue. He studied the figure. His dead lover was gazing intently into his eyes. He moved closer to the mirror and stroked the glass; he looked truly attractive with that make-up on. So twisted. Not his fault. His girlfriend was just an illusion, of course. She was dead; she wasn’t looking at him. The pangs of guilt would soon fade away…
Pain. Death. Blood. Her. Guilty

The mirror began to shake. He began to shake. His knees buckled the moment he realised what he had done. There was no turning back. One stab to slit his throat, the other two to his stomach. She had fallen to the floor in an unusual manner, silently. The dead make no sound when stabbed. Not like in the films. Her dead corpse was still warm. She was beautiful in death, he thought

its great but wouldn't tinted be better than tinged?

 

[Tiara]

why is everyone in such an artistic writer esque mood today

 

[Тоска́]

Thanks

Wrote it in 5 min, actually

we can tell

 

[pauseboicarti]

shivers...

 

[zennn]

get your ass back on ao3 nobody to around 3/4 people gaf about literary efforts on forums like this

we can tell

let people do their thing n***a oh my god why are you always hating on everything go kill yourself please

 

[gatetoheaven]

get your ass back on ao3 nobody to around 3/4 people gaf about literary efforts on forums like this

if theres a screen, ao3 will be seen

 

[gatetoheaven]

why is everyone in such an artistic writer esque mood today

when you put the halloween theme on here you get so psl (im talking about pumpkin spice lattes !)

 

[Тоска́]

let people do their thing n***a oh my god why are you always hating on everything go kill yourself please

obsessed fan i didn't mean it in a bad way at first calm yourself down jfl

 

[zennn]

obsessed fan i didn't mean it in a bad way at first calm yourself down jfl

youre fucking annoying me nobody is your fan you waste of sperm

 

[Тоска́]

ok "zenn" hows 11 days on the forum since you are supposedly better cage

 

[zennn]

ok "zenn" hows 11 days on the forum since you are supposedly better cage

???? are you fucking retarded when did i say something about being better

genuienly just talking for the sake of talking at this point we lost the fucking plot

utterly retarded foid

 

[Тоска́]

???? are you fucking retarded when did i say something about being better

genuienly just talking for the sake of talking at this point we lost the fucking plot

utterly retarded foid

ok male keep leaking itt, and better as in any way or shape to judge anyone's behaviour without having amounted to much but i guess its too difficult for a scrote to comprehend cagee

 

[zennn]

ok male keep leaking itt, and better as in any way or shape to judge anyone's behaviour without having amounted to much but i guess its too difficult for a scrote to comprehend cagee

yea its fucking impossible to understand what you mean when you literally type like a fucking autistic ass monkey

ok "zenn" hows 11 days on the forum since you are supposedly better cage

read this again and tell me it doesnt sound fucking autistic you dumbass

"hows 11 days on the forum since you are supposedly better cage"

fucking cunt