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Story The detention room [MY WORDSMITH STORY]

So this is basically a stab at everyone but disguised in book form
 
Limo, you asked a child, a child of only 14 years of age for his photos. His nude photos. The evidence is perfectly preserved and there is no way of denying this happened.
why would they bring u in the interrogation room, if they already had enough to charge u
he's trying to force a confession get a lawyer already goddamit 🤬
 
why would they bring u in the interrogation room, if they already had enough to charge u
he's trying to force a confession get a lawyer already goddamit 🤬
@limo8 LAWYER UPPP 😭😭😭😭😭
 
u tag me and cindy when that’s is alr big nono, the story has ur schizo ramblings about me when that’s is big nono too, it is in ill faith, it is disgusting, never place your judgement again 😊
 
u tag me and cindy when that’s is alr big nono, the story has ur schizo ramblings about me when that’s is big nono too, it is in ill faith, it is disgusting, never place your judgement again 😊
it is all FICTION
 

The detention room​

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December 29th 2025
All suspects are seated on chairs in a grey coloured room, no windows, only source of light comes from the faulty ceiling bulb. The only sounds heard are the beating hearts of the suspects and the beep of the audio recorder that has begun.
The interrogator makes his way inside the room, and moves towards the skinny 17 year old male sitting in front of him.

@limo8
Male, 17
Outfit - revealing too much than needed
Posture - holding a phone camera to his face taking a photo that he will post in an unrelated thread's reply section.
“Limo, you asked a child, a child of only 14 years of age for his photos. His nude photos. The evidence is perfectly preserved and there is no way of denying this happened. 14 years of age, 2 years younger than the age of consent of any country this forum touches. You were trying hard not to ask for the photos, however you did so regardless.
Nothing could make this okay.”
Turning swiftly to the next the investigator looks down at a skittish male, eyes twitching in anticipation of leaving the room and hunting down a previous romance.

@Newday
Male, 20
Posture - Stressed, fingernails bitten, leg tapping, nerves are clear.
“Newday, it would seem every single day a new argument concerning you is brought fourth, why? Well, it's clear you internet ex is your only point of any attention that your brain has held for the last 5 months. Every person he speaks to, you must speak to them, every move he takes, you must let everyone know you knew beforehand. You frame it as caring, they call it stalking. What does everyone else think? It needed punishment.”
Moving swiftly along the chair next to him houses a small child, a very very small child mentally and physically but the investigation can't stop now.

@over0
Female?, 12?
Posture - Glued to their phone like their life is dependent on such.
“Over, we have all heard it a million times, "I'm deleting my account,’ “I fucking hate this forum.” But where are you now? Here. Here still protecting and preserving your superficial .com ‘friendgroup’ in hopes it will fill the void of loneliness and your unloved state of being. Does it? Does acting like every new user is the spawn of satan make you feel good, does it make you feel like anything? Because from what everyone else sees its all pathetic. A young girl originally focused on looking better sucked into a forum where she has spent the best years of her life sucking up to older users who really, don’t care as much as you do, maybe they go outside, maybe they go to a real school? Maybe try?”
In the next chair sits just a girl really, nothing too extravagant, nothing really striking about her, why she's here would be a mystery if you didn't know her.

@sociopath
Female, 15?
Posture - Sitting on her nice couch in her loving family's home.
It's unfortunate, unfortunate how you truly think that you are fooling anyone. You think everyone's disdain for you is because you are ‘too honest’ or ‘unlike anyone else’, truthfully? You are a dork. A fabricated ‘evil’ and ‘heartless’ persona is getting you nowhere. You are a bore to the community, your threads intended to make you seem empty and soulless are nothing short of embarrassing. Your personality? Boring, in truth all it does is cause recalled memories of girls in year 6 trying to act ‘scary’ after the teacher yelled at them. It hurts me inside to read statements you make. The way you suck up to [RETRACTED] in hopes to be his next ‘e-victim’, if i was a parent, I’d be truly sickened by the behavior of a little girl like this.
As the investigator moves along he sees a male in a corner of the room, hes secluded himself from the rest and only allows himself near to the remaining males in the room, is he afraid of women, taunted by children?

@Blackpillirony
Male, 18
Outfit - A shirt so cringe it makes women physically repulse paired with tight sweatpants that are very offputting.
““MotM this, MotM that,” but he just doesn’t get it. He claims contribution to the forum yet what has he truly contributed other than some simple replies that he’s begged for a solution for? I can name a few, egotistical statements consume most of your language, an artery piercing anytime anyone slightly insults his ‘worthiness’ to the forum, you said hes not winning MotM? Well watch out for a whole paragraph spewing nothing but empty rage and recycled statements. Maybe think and remove yourself from the situation a second, no one but a bunch of new unimportant users truly think you are winning, we all see what you say, we all saw the thread. We want you back on org.”
Next, he's been seen before for some pathetic bs.

@Schizotypical
Male, 20
Outfit - The same outfit that has been worn for the past week
Posture - Weak
“Where to start? Well a comparison would be useful. He is not so different from a 15 year old girl truly. “Im deleting” “Nuke this forum”, performed a whole spectacle claiming deleting but never went through with it. Why? It was never going to happen. A grown man seeking attention in a forum filled with teenagers and people he ‘hates’. And again, is he so different to a 16 year old girl “I’m an asshole” “I don’t know how to be nice,” are you a child? Are you a female? Are you a f****t?” Why are you forcing the edginess, why are you an embarrassment. “I called Spuffy mommy in a voice note” - "It is over for you.”
Head bowed, the investigator moved along to a female sitting bored on her chair, shes missing shoes though.

@huntergirl
Female, 18
Outfit - Socks
“It really is the case that you are a unique one, why am I deleting photos of your feet in a discord server? Why were those photos even on the phone of a 16/17 year old boy anyways? So many questions, I’m sure won’t be answered. I’ll just have to move on.”
With many questions still, the investigation must go on, the next seat has a young boy next to her.

@Glamour, formally known as GlamourPursuer and can be known to some as ‘Glammy’
Male, 16
Posture - Staring at himself in the mirror for the 15th time today.
“Glamour. What makes you so ‘good’, why am I constantly hearing that you are a ‘good’ user? Because I really can't think of much! Is it the way your threads are a scattered mess, after over a year on the forum, you are still yet to contribute anything the forum is related to.
Is it the way your so called ‘good’ threads get minimal replies because they are all non thought out empty inputs onto my screen? Or possibly, is it the way you beg your friends to vote you MotM after complaining how someone who asked to get mod was modded? Hmmm. I hope you enjoy the badge glamour but you from what i can see are not a ‘good’ user.
Watching carefully the investigator moves on realising that the boy next to Glamour is also watching everyone, mirroring everyone.

@rovea, once known as Jess
Male, 16
Outfit - Made in Mumbai
Posture - Sitting in the slums of India
“Is it really me with no personality? Because I can't recall the only jokes you've personally made that didn't consist of repeating that you're from the slums of India, but the jokes I can recall? None of them are yours! “I hope its a shotgun”, sounds familiar, “Title” sounds familiar! Now you say you’re deleting but i think you’ll copy those you dickride once again and completely trash that idea soon.
And now for the two last, are they the worse of the group? Maybe one of them.

@Love, Once known as RRM
Male? Female?, 16
Outfit - Cat ears funded by a lonely incel ‘she’, ‘he’ found online
“From what it looks like, he isn't that bad really, hes nice, he is funny but he is not okay. Love, you larped as a woman, and now its all backfired - no more .org, no more clearing your name. The man you led on as a ‘female’ now won’t leave you alone? Is he at fault? Why would you do that to someone, knowing they thought you were a female when in reality you were not? He may not seem that bad right now but really think about it.”
In anticipation for this bullshit to finally end the investigator moves along, but is blinded by pristine goodness and nobleness. Shielding their eyes they move onto questioning the last suspect.

@Nbernical ❤️‍🩹
Male, 16
Height, 6,1
“Nbernical, no crimes on file. Only under supervision for being so perfect and sweet”
Everyone is sentenced to the death sentence except him.


Thanks for reading!! Hope you enjoyed it! I would’ve added more people but i got bored :/ sorry hopefully this totally wins the FICTIONAL story competition, because none of this is true!!! ❤️🤗❤️
DID READ CHAD
 
the premise of the story is interesting but its clear youre just saying how you feel about the people you dont really like in a passive aggressive way. the thing you wrote about @Schizotypalcel and i was a joke from a discord server btw just to clear that up lol. i tagged him properly since it seems that you mistyped; looking back you actually tagged him wrong each time
 
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My word smith challenge = attentions whoring and talking shit about people that don't really think much about her because the only attention she gets is on a incel forum holding nbernicals cock while grasping his nuts.

Your fantasy of me is a projection of yourself, you call me edgy but you're a attention whore, you were probably neglected.
You're a shit skin pathetic sack of shit that wakes up everyday in a type of despair we wouldn't understand cause you hide it so well. That blank thought that crosses your mind, maybe suicide, you should relieve yourself to it and cock your dads imported illegal guns back and end yourself with them. Nice break at trying to make something blow up on the forum and only making yourself look like a complete fucking loser, some people don't even deserve your shitty eviscerations so goes to show how much of a social life you have to bring this into your reality.

You didn't get bored, you ran out of projection.
 
My word smith challenge = attentions whoring and talking shit about people that don't really think much about her because the only attention she gets is on a incel forum holding nbernicals cock while grasping his nuts.

Your fantasy of me is a projection of yourself, you call me edgy but you're a attention whore, you were probably neglected.
You're a shit skin pathetic sack of shit that wakes up everyday in a type of despair we wouldn't understand cause you hide it so well. That blank thought that crosses your mind, maybe suicide, you should relieve yourself to it and cock your dads imported illegal guns back and end yourself with them. Nice break at trying to make something blow up on the forum and only making yourself look like a complete fucking loser, some people don't even deserve your shitty eviscerations so goes to show how much of a social life you have to bring this into your reality.

You didn't get bored, you ran out of projection.
do you mind reading my wordsmith 😻
 

The detention room​

images

December 29th 2025
All suspects are seated on chairs in a grey coloured room, no windows, only source of light comes from the faulty ceiling bulb. The only sounds heard are the beating hearts of the suspects and the beep of the audio recorder that has begun.
The interrogator makes his way inside the room, and moves towards the skinny 17 year old male sitting in front of him.

@limo8
Male, 17
Outfit - revealing too much than needed
Posture - holding a phone camera to his face taking a photo that he will post in an unrelated thread's reply section.
“Limo, you asked a child, a child of only 14 years of age for his photos. His nude photos. The evidence is perfectly preserved and there is no way of denying this happened. 14 years of age, 2 years younger than the age of consent of any country this forum touches. You were trying hard not to ask for the photos, however you did so regardless.
Nothing could make this okay.”
Turning swiftly to the next the investigator looks down at a skittish male, eyes twitching in anticipation of leaving the room and hunting down a previous romance.

@Newday
Male, 20
Posture - Stressed, fingernails bitten, leg tapping, nerves are clear.
“Newday, it would seem every single day a new argument concerning you is brought fourth, why? Well, it's clear you internet ex is your only point of any attention that your brain has held for the last 5 months. Every person he speaks to, you must speak to them, every move he takes, you must let everyone know you knew beforehand. You frame it as caring, they call it stalking. What does everyone else think? It needed punishment.”
Moving swiftly along the chair next to him houses a small child, a very very small child mentally and physically but the investigation can't stop now.

@over0
Female?, 12?
Posture - Glued to their phone like their life is dependent on such.
“Over, we have all heard it a million times, "I'm deleting my account,’ “I fucking hate this forum.” But where are you now? Here. Here still protecting and preserving your superficial .com ‘friendgroup’ in hopes it will fill the void of loneliness and your unloved state of being. Does it? Does acting like every new user is the spawn of satan make you feel good, does it make you feel like anything? Because from what everyone else sees its all pathetic. A young girl originally focused on looking better sucked into a forum where she has spent the best years of her life sucking up to older users who really, don’t care as much as you do, maybe they go outside, maybe they go to a real school? Maybe try?”
In the next chair sits just a girl really, nothing too extravagant, nothing really striking about her, why she's here would be a mystery if you didn't know her.

@sociopath
Female, 15?
Posture - Sitting on her nice couch in her loving family's home.
It's unfortunate, unfortunate how you truly think that you are fooling anyone. You think everyone's disdain for you is because you are ‘too honest’ or ‘unlike anyone else’, truthfully? You are a dork. A fabricated ‘evil’ and ‘heartless’ persona is getting you nowhere. You are a bore to the community, your threads intended to make you seem empty and soulless are nothing short of embarrassing. Your personality? Boring, in truth all it does is cause recalled memories of girls in year 6 trying to act ‘scary’ after the teacher yelled at them. It hurts me inside to read statements you make. The way you suck up to [RETRACTED] in hopes to be his next ‘e-victim’, if i was a parent, I’d be truly sickened by the behavior of a little girl like this.
As the investigator moves along he sees a male in a corner of the room, hes secluded himself from the rest and only allows himself near to the remaining males in the room, is he afraid of women, taunted by children?

@Blackpillirony
Male, 18
Outfit - A shirt so cringe it makes women physically repulse paired with tight sweatpants that are very offputting.
““MotM this, MotM that,” but he just doesn’t get it. He claims contribution to the forum yet what has he truly contributed other than some simple replies that he’s begged for a solution for? I can name a few, egotistical statements consume most of your language, an artery piercing anytime anyone slightly insults his ‘worthiness’ to the forum, you said hes not winning MotM? Well watch out for a whole paragraph spewing nothing but empty rage and recycled statements. Maybe think and remove yourself from the situation a second, no one but a bunch of new unimportant users truly think you are winning, we all see what you say, we all saw the thread. We want you back on org.”
Next, he's been seen before for some pathetic bs.

@Schizotypical
Male, 20
Outfit - The same outfit that has been worn for the past week
Posture - Weak
“Where to start? Well a comparison would be useful. He is not so different from a 15 year old girl truly. “Im deleting” “Nuke this forum”, performed a whole spectacle claiming deleting but never went through with it. Why? It was never going to happen. A grown man seeking attention in a forum filled with teenagers and people he ‘hates’. And again, is he so different to a 16 year old girl “I’m an asshole” “I don’t know how to be nice,” are you a child? Are you a female? Are you a f****t?” Why are you forcing the edginess, why are you an embarrassment. “I called Spuffy mommy in a voice note” - "It is over for you.”
Head bowed, the investigator moved along to a female sitting bored on her chair, shes missing shoes though.

@huntergirl
Female, 18
Outfit - Socks
“It really is the case that you are a unique one, why am I deleting photos of your feet in a discord server? Why were those photos even on the phone of a 16/17 year old boy anyways? So many questions, I’m sure won’t be answered. I’ll just have to move on.”
With many questions still, the investigation must go on, the next seat has a young boy next to her.

@Glamour, formally known as GlamourPursuer and can be known to some as ‘Glammy’
Male, 16
Posture - Staring at himself in the mirror for the 15th time today.
“Glamour. What makes you so ‘good’, why am I constantly hearing that you are a ‘good’ user? Because I really can't think of much! Is it the way your threads are a scattered mess, after over a year on the forum, you are still yet to contribute anything the forum is related to.
Is it the way your so called ‘good’ threads get minimal replies because they are all non thought out empty inputs onto my screen? Or possibly, is it the way you beg your friends to vote you MotM after complaining how someone who asked to get mod was modded? Hmmm. I hope you enjoy the badge glamour but you from what i can see are not a ‘good’ user.
Watching carefully the investigator moves on realising that the boy next to Glamour is also watching everyone, mirroring everyone.

@rovea, once known as Jess
Male, 16
Outfit - Made in Mumbai
Posture - Sitting in the slums of India
“Is it really me with no personality? Because I can't recall the only jokes you've personally made that didn't consist of repeating that you're from the slums of India, but the jokes I can recall? None of them are yours! “I hope its a shotgun”, sounds familiar, “Title” sounds familiar! Now you say you’re deleting but i think you’ll copy those you dickride once again and completely trash that idea soon.
And now for the two last, are they the worse of the group? Maybe one of them.

@Love, Once known as RRM
Male? Female?, 16
Outfit - Cat ears funded by a lonely incel ‘she’, ‘he’ found online
“From what it looks like, he isn't that bad really, hes nice, he is funny but he is not okay. Love, you larped as a woman, and now its all backfired - no more .org, no more clearing your name. The man you led on as a ‘female’ now won’t leave you alone? Is he at fault? Why would you do that to someone, knowing they thought you were a female when in reality you were not? He may not seem that bad right now but really think about it.”
In anticipation for this bullshit to finally end the investigator moves along, but is blinded by pristine goodness and nobleness. Shielding their eyes they move onto questioning the last suspect.

@Nbernical ❤️‍🩹
Male, 16
Height, 6,1
“Nbernical, no crimes on file. Only under supervision for being so perfect and sweet”
Everyone is sentenced to the death sentence except him.


Thanks for reading!! Hope you enjoyed it! I would’ve added more people but i got bored :/ sorry hopefully this totally wins the FICTIONAL story competition, because none of this is true!!! ❤️🤗❤️
Wb me
 
 
My word smith challenge = attentions whoring and talking shit about people that don't really think much about her because the only attention she gets is on a incel forum holding nbernicals cock while grasping his nuts.

Your fantasy of me is a projection of yourself, you call me edgy but you're a attention whore, you were probably neglected.
You're a shit skin pathetic sack of shit that wakes up everyday in a type of despair we wouldn't understand cause you hide it so well. That blank thought that crosses your mind, maybe suicide, you should relieve yourself to it and cock your dads imported illegal guns back and end yourself with them. Nice break at trying to make something blow up on the forum and only making yourself look like a complete fucking loser, some people don't even deserve your shitty eviscerations so goes to show how much of a social life you have to bring this into your reality.

You didn't get bored, you ran out of projection.
chill out mate its all fiction I guess you knew the shoe fit so youre taking it to heart like a little girl
 
the premise of the story is interesting but its clear youre just saying how you feel about the people you dont really like in a passive aggressive way. the thing you wrote about @Schizotypalcel and i was a joke from a discord server btw just to clear that up lol. i tagged him properly since it seems that you mistyped; looking back you actually tagged him wrong each time
nah its all fiction
 
fuck you and your stupid ass story
 
fuck you and your stupid ass story
 
ong this is tough
 

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