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Guide Why does SEMATARY make trap if he sucks at rhymes? + Flow Comparison with GHOST MOUNTAIN

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(GHOST MOUNTAIN)
you a dark red stain on the pavement
imma recluse find me in the basement
black aerosol lungs straight wasted
reapers coming headlights in the distance
dont come around dont show your face
ghost
mountain sematary we dont leave a trace
ride into the night this a deathrace
better run cuz we peelin down the interstate

Meanwhile...
(SEMATARY)
Its them dirty boys from round the way
Riden out ghost mountain sematary
I might just break somebody skull today
Woke up this morning said fuck today
I been swerving hard on the interstate
Cus I don’t give a fuck about anything
I might just break somebody skull today
Woke up this morning said fuck today

I don’t smoke dope cus it dull my hate
3 days awake seen my shadow today
I inject red bull in my shoulder blades
Thats a nice high but I don’t need wings
Im don’t think ima leave my house today

Blud repeating "today" way too many times. He's rapping based on the last word as well and it's okay to do perfect consonant rhymes twice or thrice, but it will make you lose flow
 
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Tbh Im not a big fan of Sematary

The only songs I enjoy are Bunny Suit, Nevada, Funeral
SEMATARY sucks, only GHOST MOUNTAIN sounds good
Don't ever listen to SEMATARY solo
 
Trap mogs hard
 
Ye Ye more people should know about metrics
 
interstate is just reusing lines from the rest of the album but its still such a good song
 

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